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Below is our first draft for our radio trailer.



We shared our trailer on the social networking site facebook and recieved some mixed crictisms. Alot of people commented and said how they were impressed with the overall tone of the film as it followed and conformed to the typical horror conventions found in Horror radio trailer.

 In particular people commented and liked the 'Happy Birthday' aspect at the start of the trailer as they said it created a 'creepy' tone and intrigued them. However a dislike from many people was the main dialogue being spoken which informed the audience about the name of the film and release date etc. It was said that it seemed to 'computerized' and unrealistic which didnt link with the theme and style of our film which is realistic horror.


After reflecting on the comments received myself and my partner Ciara agreed with the comments made and agreed to re record our trailer however this time using a younger speaker relating more with our target audience which is 16-30 males and females. To ensure that the sound of our new recording will be perfect is we decied to re record in a silent room with only myself Ciara and the speaker present.


Below is our new trailer;